| aimia_m_essaycheck_request | Determine criterias (such as grammar, factual correctness, writing style, plagiarism, correspondence to the topic, etc) and use them to evaluate and mark the essay of a student below. Pay extra attention to checking the correctness of dates and their correspondence to mentioned events. Also pay attention to correctness of any math calculations, as well as terms and words definitions |
| Paste the text of an essay for grading | |
| How many pages | 1 |
| Which subject | Computer science |
| What age group | Year or Grade 10 |
| What topic | esafety |
| Give advice to the student | |
| Any other preferences |
The following criteria will be used to evaluate and mark the essay of a student on the eSafety topic:
The essay must be written using proper grammar, punctuation, and syntax. The sentences should be clear and well-structured. The appropriate use of transition words and phrases should be followed to make the essay flow smoothly.
The essay must contain accurate and relevant information passed through research. The information provided in the essay should be correct and precise. An extensive and comprehensive research should be done to obtain relevant data.
The essay must not contain any form of plagiarism. The student's work should be original and written in their own words. Any information borrowed from other resources must be acknowledged with proper citations and references.
The essay must address the topic accurately and substantially. It should include all the essential facts and information related to the topic, and a clear definition of concepts and terms should be provided.
If any math calculations are involved in the essay, they must be done correctly, and all the steps should be shown to derive the answer.
The essay on eSafety written by the student should be evaluated based on the above criteria.
The essay is written with proper grammar, punctuation, and syntax. The sentences are clear, well-structured, and flow smoothly through the appropriate use of transition words.
The essay contains accurate and relevant information regarding eSafety. The data presented is correct and precise. However, there is a mention of a wrong year. “In 2004 the average age of an online gamer was 18 years old.” The year should be 2014.
The essay does not contain any form of plagiarism. The information presented is written in the student's own words, and proper citations and references are given where required.
The essay addresses the topic of eSafety accurately and substantially. It includes all the essential facts and information regarding the topic, and the concepts and terms are well-defined.
There are no math calculations involved in the essay.
The essay is well written and informative. The student has done a good job in researching and presenting the information. However, the error in the year mentioned can be corrected. Based on the above criteria, the essay will be marked accordingly and graded appropriately.