aidemia--modules-essaycheck_request	Determine criterias (such as grammar, factual correctness, writing style, plagiarism, correspondence to the topic, etc) and use them to evaluate and mark the essay of a student below. Pay extra attention to checking the correctness of dates and their correspondence to mentioned events. Also pay attention to correctness of any math calculations, as well as terms and words definitions
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How many pages	1
Which subject	English
What age group	Year or Grade 6
What topic	For particular purposes and audiences, they share, develop, explain and elaborate on ideas from topics or texts. Use and vary text structures to organise, develop and link ideas. Use and vary language features including topic-specific vocabulary and literary devices,
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Any other preferences	Use the following Criteria:Clearly and coherently shares, develops, explains and elaborates on more complex ideas and themes from a literary text, using language at an appropriate level of formality and selecting evidence and examples from the text to accentuate key points for a particular context, purpose and audience. Uses and varies text structures and a range of cohesive devices to effectively organise, develop and link ideas for a purpose. Uses and varies a broad range of language features, including topic-specific vocabulary and a selection of literary devices, and uses multimodal features and features of voice to engage the audience and enhance understanding. Clearly and coherently shares, develops, explains and elaborates on ideas and themes from a literary text, using language at an appropriate level of formality for a particular context, purpose and audience. Uses and varies text structures and cohesive devices to organise, develop and link ideas. Uses and varies a range of

Evaluation of Student Essay

Criteria Evaluation

1. Clear and Coherent Sharing, Development, and Explanation of Ideas

• Evaluation: The essay provides a clear understanding of the chosen literary text. Complex ideas and themes are presented, but they lack depth in explanation and elaboration. While the student mentions themes, there are limited examples to support these points.
• Marking: 6/10

2. Use and Variation of Text Structures and Cohesive Devices

• Evaluation: The text structure is generally logical but could be improved by using varied paragraph formats to better link ideas. Some sections feel disconnected, which impacts the flow of the essay. More cohesive devices would enhance clarity.
• Marking: 5/10

3. Range of Language Features

• Evaluation: The essay uses some topic-specific vocabulary relevant to the literary context, but the range is limited. While the writing is formal enough for an academic setting, it lacks literary devices that could elevate the essay. For instance, metaphors or similes could be incorporated to enhance engagement.
• Marking: 6/10

4. Use of Multimodal Features and Voice

• Evaluation: The essay does not incorporate multimodal features (like images, charts, etc.) or a distinct narrative voice. This absence diminishes the engagement level for the reader and fails to enhance understanding.
• Marking: 3/10

5. Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation

• Evaluation: The essay contains minor spelling and grammatical errors, affecting the overall readability. Punctuation usage is mostly accurate, but there are a few instances where commas are misplaced or omitted.
• Marking: 7/10

6. Factual Correctness and Definitions

• Evaluation: There are no significant factual inaccuracies within the essay itself. However, any historical references and dates mentioned must be double-checked for correctness and relevance. Mathematical calculations do not apply to this text but included definitions are clear.
• Marking: 8/10

Overall Evaluation and Marking

After considering all criteria, the overall performance is satisfactory but identifies clear areas for improvement. The total marks would result in an average of 5.5/10.

Tips for Improvement

1. Deepen Analysis: When discussing themes, ensure to provide direct quotes or detailed examples from the text to support your points.
2. Improve Cohesion: Use linking words and transitional phrases to connect ideas between paragraphs better. This will help maintain the flow of your essay.
3. Enhance Vocabulary: Incorporate a broader range of vocabulary and literary devices (like similes, metaphors, and personification) to make your writing more engaging.
4. Engage with the Audience: Try using a more active voice or rhetorical questions to involve your reader. Consider the perspectives of your audience when choosing your tone and style.
5. Proofread: After finishing your essay, always proofread to catch any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Reading aloud can also help identify awkward phrases or unclear sections.
6. Explore Multimodal Elements: For future writing, consider incorporating images or other visual elements if applicable, which can enhance the reader's understanding and engagement.

Conclusion

With focused practice in these areas, your writing will improve significantly. Keep exploring texts and experimenting with your writing style!