Dear [Recipient],

I trust this message finds you well. I am reaching out to request a restyle of the text that was recently presented. As it currently stands, the tone is inappropriate and does not reflect a professional approach.

In order to ensure that the message is communicated effectively and tactfully, I would propose a style that is more formal and respectful in its delivery. By taking a more measured approach, we can avoid any misunderstandings and promote a positive working relationship.

Please let me know if this request can be accommodated and if any further information is required.

Thank you for your attention to this matter.

Kind regards,

[Sender]